Coherence and Cohesion

My project addresses the dilemma of whether commercial recording studios income and population are declining due to the rise of home studios.  This decline is not because of one problem commercial recording studios face, but it faces multiple detrimental problems, which in years, could kill them off as an industry standard of recording. In the near future, because of their recent exploitation of high quality audio achievements, home studios may take the crown of an "industry standard recording studio."